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JoJo Rabbit Screenplay by Taika Waititi

December 7, 2021

Based on the Book “Caging Skies” by Christine Leunens

 

Storyline by Shari Goodhartz:

Ten-year-old, aspiring Hitler youth JoJo enjoys an imaginary friendship with Adolf himself while being forced to reckon with cognitive dissonance on learning that his delightfully playful mother is hiding a 17-year-old Jewish girl in their house.

Film & Paradigm Analysis by Shari Goodhartz:

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Act I sets up aspiring Hitler Youth JOJO (10) enjoying an imaginary friendship with a wacky version of ADOLF. JoJo attends CAPTAIN KLENZENDORF’s weekend training camp, where he’s bullied for being unwilling to kill a bunny. Adolf convinces JoJo to shame the other boys by throwing a live hand-grenade, which bounces off a tree and injures JoJo. His mother ROSIE is revealed to be incredibly playful and loving.

With his face, arm and leg injured, Plot Point I finds JoJo discovering that a Jewish girl named ELSA (17) is hiding in their house. They verbally spar and she easily takes his camp knife.

At the top of Act II, Rosie secretly visits Elsa. They discuss JoJo, who confirms that his mother is hiding a Jew but won’t confront her. Instead, he visits Captain Klenzendorf to learn more about the demon-like nature of Jews.

Klenzendorf demurs, but says someone ought to write a book about it. JoJo decides to interview Elsa and write such a book. To JoJo’s great displeasure, Rosie reports that the Allies are winning the war, then good-naturedly cheers him up.

At the Midpoint, JoJo poses as Elsa’s fiancé in a break-up letter, intending to hurt her. She is saddened, but not for the reasons he thinks. He quickly writes a second letter undoing the first.

In the second half of Act II, Rosie reiterates that the Reich is dying. JoJo spends more time with Elsa while composing his fancifully nasty exposé on Jews with illustrations. Adolf disapproves of JoJo spending so much time with Elsa, who tells JoJo he’s not a Nazi. JoJo realizes he’s in love. When Gestapo agents visit the house, Elsa pretends to be JoJo’s devoted-Nazi sister and gets away with the ruse because the SS are charmed by JoJo’s book. Klenzendorf also provides some sly help.

Plot Point II finds JoJo collecting metal door-to-door for the war effort. He discovers Rosie hanging in the street with other subversives.

Elsa tries to comfort JoJo in Act III, revealing that she suspected both Rosie and JoJo’s MIA father work for the resistance. JoJo fears his mother hated him for being a Nazi. JoJo learns how Rosie saved Elsa, and that Hitler killed himself. After saving JoJo’s life, Klenzendorf is killed by a Russian soldier. Elsa admits her fiancé died last year of TB and they decide to love each other as siblings. At the Climax, JoJo power-kicks Adolf out of his bedroom window.

The story is Resolved when JoJo takes Elsa outside by recalling a ruse his mother used earlier on him. They dance in the street as American soldiers drive past.

Main Story Beats

Paradigm Charts Analysis

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Get Out Written by Jordan Peele

May 25, 2020

Paradigm Analysis by Shari Goodhartz

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Act I first sets up the nighttime abduction of ANDRE (20’s, black) in a suburban setting, then establishes the relationship of 20-something photographer CHRIS and ROSE (he’s black, she’s white). They’re packing to visit her parents’ lake-house for the weekend. Chris presses to discover whether Rose has told them he’s black (her first black boyfriend, at that, and he doesn’t want to get chased away with a shot gun). She hasn’t, but assures him that they’re a sometimes-annoying flavor of clueless liberalism, and definitely not racists. Also set up is Chris’s best friend ROD, who works for the TSA and will be dog-sitting for Chris over the weekend. At the lake-house, Chris meets Rose’s parents DEAN (a neurosurgeon) and MISSY (a psychiatrist), and her brother JEREMY (a med student). He also sees WALTER, the groundskeeper, and his wife GEORGINA, the housekeeper. The servants are a young black couple, who are decidedly awkward around Chris, and unexpectedly catered to by Dean and Missy.

Plot Point I finds Chris in Missy’s psychiatric office in the lake-house. She’d offered to hypnotize him to cure his cigarette addiction. Though Chris turned down this offer earlier, he’s having trouble sleeping. While repeatedly stirring a spoon in a teacup, Missy asks about his mother’s death. He doesn’t want to talk about it, but starts to anyway… and suddenly we’re with YOUNG CHRIS watching television on that tragic, rainy night. Once Chris has surrendered to Missy’s guidance, he’s unable to move and she fantastically sends his mind through the floor into The Sunken Place. He wakes up in bed the next morning, remembering only that he’d been hypnotized.

Act II brings the annual gathering of Rose’s dead grandfather’s friends – mostly old, white couples – who are all thrilled to meet Chris. But they’re also creepily inappropriate about his physicality (handsome, athletic), his relationship with Rose (must be incredibly hot), and black culture (that doesn’t really exist, right?). Rose rolls her eyes a lot and tries to laugh off the casual – and utterly harmless – racism of the older generation with Chris.

At the Midpoint, Chris discovers there’s another young black man present, LOGAN (who we recognize as abducted Andre from the opening scene, and who Chris also recognizes, but can’t remember from where). “Logan” dresses, talks and behaves in ways clearly coded as old and white. He also has an elderly white wife, PHILOMENA. The way these people interact (including the relaxed physical intimacies between “Logan” and Philomena) makes Chris uneasy.

In the second half of Act II, Chris takes a flash picture of “Logan,” which transforms his old-white-guy affect into the young black man he appears. “Logan,” whose nose has started to bleed, grabs Chris, telling him to “Get out!” Jeremy pulls “Logan” off of Chris and hauls him away, screaming. Chris is so shaken he wants to leave, but Rose takes him on a walk to the lake where they can talk. The party quickly morphs into a disturbing silent auction, revealing Chris as the “prize.” That night, Chris texts the “Logan” image to Rod, who immediately recognizes Andre. Rod is sure that Andre’s been hypnotized and now serves the old white folks as a sex slave. Just then, Chris’s phone dies. Chris discovers a tiny closet nearby, its door cracked open. Inside, a red box awaits him, and inside of that are a stack of photos with Rose and other young, black men. Clearly, Chris is not her first boyfriend of color. The last picture is of Rose with a smiling young, black woman – who Chris knows as the increasingly bizarre housekeeper Georgina.

At Plot Point II, Chris convinces Rose that they have to leave immediately, but Rose can’t find her car keys. While Jeremy blocks Chris’s exit through the front door, Dean and Missy (holding her tea cup and spoon) calmly watch Chris start to panic. Rose frantically rummages her purse as Chris screams for her to give the keys to him. Instantly cool, she holds up the keys and replies “You know I can’t give them to you, right babe?” Three sharp spoon taps on the teacup topple Chris, instantly immobilized by Missy’s hypnotic trigger, and he’s in The Sunken Place.

Act III finds Chris in the basement, tied to a chair in front of a vintage television set. A series of videos explain the ruthless, Coagular Brain-Transplantation Conspiracy, in which a sliver of Chris’s brainstem will remain intact, but also subsumed by most of the brain of JIM (a blind old white guy who “won” the auction), which will take over primary consciousness and motor functions of Chris’s body. The process works best if the “host” understands what’s happening to him. Chris cleverly escapes the surgery, killing Dean, Missy and Jeremy as they try to stop him from leaving, but he’s also wounded. Chris drives off in Jeremy’s car (the freaky abductor’s mask from the opening scene is in the front seat), only to hit Georgina, who may or may not be dead. Remembering the night his mother was killed, Chris realizes that despite the existential danger to himself, he can’t just leave. Georgina is alive, but unconscious, as he puts her in the passenger seat. She quickly awakens, and starts to scream at him about ruining her house. Chris loses control of the car and crashes it, killing Georgina. Meanwhile, Rose has realized something is wrong and she exits the house with a shotgun. She sees the crash, “Grandma…” Rose and Walter head towards the car and Chris, who’s limping away, “Get him, Grandpa.” Hale and hearty Walter quickly takes down Chris, and seems to be about to blind him with his thumbs.

At the Climax, Chris pulls a phone from his pocket and camera flashes Walter, hoping to free the body’s host from his Sunken Place. Though Walter lets go of Chris, it doesn’t seem to have worked. Walter takes the gun from Rose, saying he wants to kill Chris himself, but he shoots Rose in the gut instead. Walter then puts the muzzle under his chin and blasts off his own head. However, Rose is still alive and reaches for the gun. Chris and Rose fight and despite his own injuries, Chris gains the upper hand and starts to choke the life out of her. At first she pleads with him not to kill her, but finally she smiles smugly up at him, implying, “See, you’re just like us.” This horrific revelation of her deepest truth provokes Chris to let go.

The story is Resolved when Rod arrives in a TSA police car and drives off with Chris, leaving Rose to bleed out alone on the driveway.

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Paradigm Charts Analysis

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Avatar Written by James Cameron

May 25, 2020

Paradigm Analysis by Shari Goodhartz

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 Act I sets up Jake as a paraplegic marine whose identical twin brother (Tom) has recently died while working as a scientist on the environmentally hostile-to-humans planet of Pandora, whose indigenous humanoid population is the Na’vi. A mining company, and its military escort, offers Jake free, state-of-the-art surgery to restore the use of his legs if he takes his brother’s place in a neuro-psychic link tank that allows him to “drive” a Na’vi avatar-body that incorporated Tom’s DNA, which only Jake can now use.

Plot Point I finds inexperienced Jake, in his Na’vi avatar, forced to stay overnight, alone in Pandora’s alien forest. Scientific team leader Grace doesn’t believe he’ll survive on his own against the pack of beasts that have already attacked him once, but she has no choice but to leave him behind till dawn.

Act II sees Jake being reluctantly rescued from the beasts by Na’vi female Neytiri, who receives a clear “sign” from the local plant-life that he has been chosen to help the Na’vi people in an important way. He is grudgingly allowed to stay with the Na’vi and train in their skills and customs. They are completely unaware that Jake is secretly gathering intelligence about them and reporting to the belligerent human Colonel each night.

After many challenges, the Midpoint grants Jake acceptance into Neytiri’s clan. He stands in the center of a circle of Na’vi, all reaching their hands out to touch each other’s shoulders to create a massive, living-mandala of tribal belonging.

The second half of Act II finds the Colonel using Jake’s intel to attack the Tree of Voices, a sacred biological repository of the ancestral spirits and wisdom of the Na’vi. At Plot Point II, Neytiri discovers Jake’s betrayal and utterly rejects him personally (they’ve become lovers and life-bonded partners), as well as his membership in her clan. Jake and Grace are tied up to await punishment.

 Act III escalates the human military assault on the Na’vi Home Tree, which eventually leads to Grace’s death at the Tree of Souls while establishing the possibility that a human consciousness can be permanently moved into a Na’vi avatar. After many battles, the human military is defeated by the gathering of Na’vi clans, which were enabled by Jake’s masterful link with a giant Pandoran dragon. However his human body is left vulnerable to the vengeful malice of the humiliated Colonel in a powerful exo-suit. In the Climax, Neytiri kills the Colonel and saves Jake’s human body from the toxic Pandoran air.

The story is Resolved when most of the human colonizers are expelled from Pandora and Jake’s consciousness is successfully transferred into his Na’vi body.

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Annie Hall: A Nervous Romance Written by Woody Allen and Marshall Brickman

July 4, 2013

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A few weeks ago, I happened to see Annie Hall on television. I still think it’s one of the funniest movies I have ever seen. The structure itself is unique; from the first minute of the opening monologue, when Woody Allen wonders what went wrong in his relationship with Annie Hall, I was totally hooked. While the film begins in present time with Alvy whining for his lost relationship, we see the relationship in bits and pieces.

The story begins in present time, then shows us some hysterical scenes of Alvy’s early childhood. He grew up under a rollercoaster, he says, which is why he tends to be a little nervous. The film flashes back to his two marriages, based, we see, on sex rather than love. We share some of his memories with Annie, then we flash back to Alvy’s first encounter with Annie when they first meet on the tennis court.

When I first saw the film many years ago, I had tried to analyze the structure in relation to the paradigm, but I saw very quickly it wouldn’t work.

anniehall3 - <span class='title-italic'>Annie Hall: </span>A Nervous Romance <span class='title-author'>Written by Woody Allen and Marshall Brickman</span>I didn’t understand how Annie Hall was put together. I had to approach my analysis from a different perspective. I wondered if you could structure a story around the growth and change of a character? Alvy is a person who refuses to change, whereas Annie Hall is a person who changes and grows constantly. Can a screenplay told mostly in flashback be structured around the dramatic need of the character?

Woody Allen sets up his character’s point of view immediately from page one, word one, in Alvy’s monologue. I saw that Act I sets up Alvy’s present situation and past relationships. Everything Alvy refers to relates back to the time when he and Annie were together.

Alvy’s character, as set up in Act I, goes from present time to past time. Act II deals with Alvy and Annie’s relationship, from recreating their first stirrings of passion (including that glorious subtext scene on the balcony) to their final separation. The last part of the movie is played out as Alvy unsuccessfully tries to recreate his relationship with Annie with other women.

Woody Allen is brilliant at setting up characters, then getting inside their heads. Alvy explains his point of view, how he sees life in the opening monologue: “A lot of suffering, pain, anxiety and problems – and it’s all over much too quickly.” He tells a joke, attributed to Groucho Marx, sharing how he feels about himself: “I would never belong to any club that would have someone like me for a member. That’s the key joke of my adult life in terms of my relationships with women.” And that’s what the film shows us; his relationship with women, focusing on Annie Hall.

anniehall4 - <span class='title-italic'>Annie Hall: </span>A Nervous Romance <span class='title-author'>Written by Woody Allen and Marshall Brickman</span>The movie unfolds from Alvy’s point of view. In the dictionary, “point of view” is defined as “the way a person sees the world.” And Alvy certainly “sees” his world in a bizarre and unusual way.

In all my reading and analyzing movies, I was aware that most good films focus on the unfolding of a specific incident or event; and that incident becomes the engine that powers the story to its completion.

In Annie Hall, the key incident that drives the story forward is Alvy’s relationship with Annie Hall. That’s a no-brainer. In the opening monologue, within the first two minutes of the film, Alvy says, “I keep sifting the pieces of the relationship through my mind and examining my life and trying to figure out where the screw-up came.” Since the film is told in an odd structural dynamic, the incident, the relationship with Annie, provides the “pieces” that tell the story.

The first act, after the monologue, shows us Alvy’s childhood, his early school years growing up under the roller coaster on Coney Island, his tendency toward anxiety and depression. It not only shows us his dysfunctional childhood, but also illustrates his relationship with women, starting with his mother who’s always trying to change his father. It illustrates Alvy’s early obsession with sex and his belief that sex is the predominant drive in a relationship, the fantasy source and wellspring of all happiness.

And that, for me, is the key to the film: Alvy’s search for happiness. Alvy believes Annie Hall will be the key that unlocks the happiness he knows is inside of him. He thinks that the source of happiness is found outside himself, through another person, or having a lot of money, a powerful job or career, or through drugs and alcohol, or eating great food, anything, in short, that will fill up the empty hole of loneliness and unhappiness that so many people feel inside. Alvy’s search for a woman becomes a mirror of his own quest for happiness. What gets in the way is his unrealistic idealism, which becomes the source of his breakup with Annie Hall. You know, “I Love You, You’re Perfect, Now Change.” Alvy’s quest to make Annie into his own image is the very reason the relationship fails. Alvy is not able to accept Annie for who she is, because he wants her to conform to his image of who she is and what she should be. Unconditional love it, it ain’t.

In Act II, we watch the relationship begin to unravel when Alvy suggests that Annie take adult education classes, then criticizes her when she quotes her teacher. He sulks when she expresses herself by singing in a night club, and is totally jealous when Tony Lacy (Paul Simon) takes an interest in her and invites them to a little gathering after the show. Alvy, of course, declines. We know where this relationship is going – down the tubes.

anniehall1 - <span class='title-italic'>Annie Hall: </span>A Nervous Romance <span class='title-author'>Written by Woody Allen and Marshall Brickman</span>Near the end of Act II, almost at the end of their relationship, there’s a marvelous scene, among many, done in split scene, where Annie and Alvy are both seen in therapy sessions; Alvy lies on a couch, Annie sits in a chair. Both lament the fact their feelings have changed toward each other, but it’s how they see the same thing that brings the humor out. Both psychiatrists ask “do you have sex often?” and Alvy replies “Hardly ever. Maybe three times a week.” And Annie replies: “Constantly! I’d say three times a week.” It’s a perfect illustration of “The world is as you see it” as the ancient scriptures say.

Just before Plot Point II, when Alvy is invited to give an award on a TV show in LA, they fly out but Alvy gets sick, naturally, and can’t give out the award. Later, they end up at a party at Tony Lacy’s house where he renews his interest in Annie. Alvy sees just how different they are; he’s the one who has given her the opportunity to grow and change, and he can’t deal with it. On the flight home, the two of them are immersed in their own thoughts, each knowing the relationship is over. Annie turns to him and says, “You know, I don’t think our relationship is working.” And Alvy replies, “A relationship, I think. is like a shark.it has to constantly move forward or it dies.. And I think what we’ve got on our hands.is a dead shark.” The truth at last.

The relationship ends not with a bang, but with a whimper. When they return to New York, Annie moves to LA to be with Tony Lacy, and Alvy tries to recreate some of his experiences with Annie with other women, but it’s not the same. It doesn’t work because no one can step into the same river twice. Their break up, Plot Point II, “spins” the action into Act III, the Resolution.

Once I analyzed the film from the perspective of character I understood Alvy’s dramatic need, and only then did the structure ring true. It didn’t matter that the film is told in flashback, the structure was still clear. Alvy sets up what’s going through his mind in the opening monologue. He sets up his disjointed childhood, how he relates to women with visual “excerpts” of his two brief marriages. At that point he cuts to the flashback of his first meeting with Annie at the tennis club. That incident sets up the relationship and leads us into Act II.

It showed me once again that there is a definite relationship between story, character and structure. They are part and parcel of the same thing. There is no way to really separate them. That’s when I learned that good structure does not create a good story, a good story is what creates structure.

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La Notte Written by Michelangelo Antonioni & Ennio Flaiano & Tonino Guerra

July 4, 2013

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On September 29th, the great Italian filmmaker Michelangelo Antonioni celebrates his 90th birthday. His universally acclaimed films, L’Avventura, La Notte, Red Desert, L’Eclisse, Blow Up, Zabriski Point, and others, have been praised and dammed by film critics around the world. But everyone agrees that Antonioni is a film genius, an artist who has influenced filmmakers and the contemporary cinema around the world. I thought it would be appropriate to pay homage to Antonioni during this wonderful celebration of his life. To me, he is the Maestro of contemporary cinema.

Back in the 60’s, I had read about Michaelangelo Antonioni, heard about him, but had never seen a film of his until I saw La Notte. As I sat in the theater and watched those images unfolding in front of me, I had an amazing and deep-seated emotional response. It just hit me in the gut. For days, certain images from the film haunted me, always a sure sign, I knew, that there was something important for me to learn.

As I went back over the film in my mind, I began to understand that it worked on two different levels. One level is the ordinary, visual surface level, which portrayed those seemingly ordinary events that make up our day to day existence. The other level, deeper and far richer, occurs below the surface details, and deals with the emotional action and interaction between the two main characters. It was this second level, the emotional state, that revealed the true nature of what the characters are thinking and feeling. In that regards, I saw that what was left unsaid became far more important that what was said.

At the first viewing of La Notte, I only sensed this emotional state; I had no words to express it, only these vague, lingering images. Seeing it a second time, I felt that maybe Antonioni had uncovered some kind of new visual language, and used his images to create an emotional response, something felt, not spoken. Later, I would discover this subterranean emotional level would be known as subtext, something I had known and practiced during my acting career.

In the film, Giovanni (Marcello Mastroianni) and Lidia (Jeanne Moreau) have lived in Milan during their ten years of marriage. Giovanni is a successful novelist whose new book has just been published, but emotionally, he is in a crisis. He feels his best years are behind him, and he”™s stuck in the meaninglessness of writing a new novel. Lidia feels empty, telling Giovanni that she no longer feels the same toward him.

antonioni - <span class='title-italic'>La Notte </span> <span class='title-author'>Written by Michelangelo Antonioni & Ennio Flaiano & Tonino Guerra</span>It took me several viewings to understand that one of Antonioni’s greatest achievements in illustrating characters is that they see themselves in each other. Visiting their dying friend in the hospital they ride in the elevator, and carefully avoid looking at each other. Two people, separate, but together, without emotional bonds of sympathy or encouragement. Their dying friend tells Giovanni and Lidia that being in the hospital has given him time to think and it’s only now that he understands that he is a person who “lacks the courage to get to the bottom of things.” In a way, he could be speaking for Giovanni as both sense they are seeing a reflection of their own lives.

Antonioni demonstrates the power of silence in film, and shows how it can be much more effective than words. The chasm in their marriage is shown visually, through their behavior.

When Giovanni and Lidia leave the hospital and take a long drive to a party celebrating the publication of his new book, we sense the emotional distance between them. They drive in absolute silence. Once again, I saw that Antonioni uses this little scene of driving in the car to illustrate their isolation from each other.

At the publication party, Lidia, looking and feeling like the outsider, leaves and wanders through the city. We see what she sees, and sense her alienation from her husband and herself. The simple stroll reveals the emotional state of the character and I saw that the empty landscapes of the city reveals her state of mind. So simple, yet so rich, I responded on both an emotional and intellectual level.

Many critics and reviewers did not understand this long walk. To me, it represents another aspect of the journey into insight and clarity. Everything in La Notte is part of a journey: a journey to hope, a journey to despair, a journey of fulfillment, a journey seeking an emotional connection to other people, a journey to freedom, a journey to isolation, the journey from night to day. After all, the journey from night to day, from darkness to light, from ignorance to knowledge, is all part of the journey of life.

lanotte11 - <span class='title-italic'>La Notte </span> <span class='title-author'>Written by Michelangelo Antonioni & Ennio Flaiano & Tonino Guerra</span>Later, at an evening party given in honor of Giovanni by a wealthy industrialist, Lidia is tempted by a rich playboy, while Giovanni is tempted by Valentina (Monica Vitti), the daughter of their host. When it begins to rain, many of the partygoers seek a diversion by leaping into the pool. Giovanni and Valentina share some pleasant moments together, and like many strangers, share their most intimate thoughts. He tells her “I believe now that I’m no longer capable of writing. I know what to write but not how to write it.” Like many of Antonioni’s characters, Giovanni’s personal life is reflected in his inability to work; he is what he does. It’s not his ideas and convictions that have been lost, but the force, the energy, and the inner fire to create a work of art, which has been lost. Ideas are part of his make-up; they may change, evolve, come and go, but they are never lost. It’s in the physical act of producing his work that Giovanni has become powerless.

Lidia telephones the hospital to find out how their friend is doing, only to learn he has just died. When she goes to tell Giovanni, she sees him kissing Valentina, and turns away.

They leave the party in silence, and walk out into the cold, gray light of dawn, and that’s when she tells him of their friend’s death. She says that “if I want to die, it’s because I no longer love you. That’s the reason for my despair. I would like to be old already, to have devoted my whole life to you. I don’t want to exist any more because I can’t love you.” And, he replies:”I have given you nothing, I amount to nothing. I have wasted and I’m still wasting my life, like an idiot, taking without giving anything or giving too little in exchange. It’s strange that only today did I realize that what we give to others comes back to ourselves.”

At the end of the film, sitting in the gray light of dawn at a deserted golf course, she reads him an old love letter, moving, poetic, from the heart. When he asks, “who wrote it,” she looks at him for a long moment, then confides “you did.” A little overstated, true, but it allows us to realize the depth of his despair. He turns to her, and tries to force his love upon her, trying to recapture their lost passion. As day breaks, the script reads, “A sort of animal passion, a memory of that which was and which will never be again, grips them.” Fade out.

I had no words, or language, about what I felt at the time I first saw La Notte, but as I studied the film over and over again, I grasped that something new was at work here, something profound, a different way of telling stories in pictures. Antonioni seemed to tell his stories internally, revealing the language of the heart through visual images.

lanotte10 - <span class='title-italic'>La Notte </span> <span class='title-author'>Written by Michelangelo Antonioni & Ennio Flaiano & Tonino Guerra</span>A lot of people did not like La Notte because they claimed “nothing really happens;” there is no plot, no action and it’s way too long. Some critics asserted the film is simply an “empty testament of modern life,” not even a “slice of life,” and they viewed Antonioni as a filmmaker who is too internal, focusing on what does not happen, rather than on what could happen. Whatever that means. Like Rashomon, everyone saw something different.

My response to the film had been so powerful that I kept dreaming about it, jotting notes down in my journal. Looking back, I think what I responded to the most was how I identified with the characters and their search for meaning in life.

Seeing La Notte, I discovered a visual metaphor about the search for love. As I became more familiar with some of Antonioni’s later films I saw that many of his movies deal with this theme. The questions he raises are simple, yet profound; how does a person live in the modern world, in a world of change, cynicism and technology, with integrity, values, faith and love.

The emotional landscape that Antonioni explores, whether in L’Avventura, La Notte, Red Desert, Eclipse, Zabriskie Point, or his last film, Beyond the Clouds, all deal with this same theme. F. Scott Fitzgerald once wrote that we only write one or two stories during our lives; it doesn’t matter how many books we write, or how many movies we make, we end up exploring the same themes over and over again.

magnolia1 - <span class='title-italic'>Magnolia: </span>An Appreciation <span class='title-author'>Written by Paul Thomas Anderson</span>

Magnolia: An Appreciation Written by Paul Thomas Anderson

July 4, 2013

magnolia1 - <span class='title-italic'>Magnolia: </span>An Appreciation <span class='title-author'>Written by Paul Thomas Anderson</span>
Screenwriting is a craft that occasionally rises to the level of an art. An art because there are times when it taps directly into the human heart, transcending time, place, language and culture. A craft because it depends upon form, concept, character and structure.

Magnolia pushes the form of the screenplay to another level. Why and how were the questions I wanted to ask. How did he structure the film and what were the elements that made it work? I hadn’t seen Magnolia when it was first released, and I hadn’t seen Boogie Nights or Hard Eight either, so I literally knew nothing about the work of Paul Thomas Anderson other than what I had heard or read about him. When I did finally get to see it, it was late in the afternoon and a light drizzle was falling. I jumped into my car, drove to the theater, walked inside, got my popcorn, found a seat and waited for the film to begin.

As the movie unfolded, I saw there were ideas here, ideas of death, of reconciliation and forgiveness, relationships between fathers and sons and fathers and daughters, relationships between chance, destiny and fate, and the interconnectedness of all things. Anderson’s style of filmmaking seemed more like poetry than a series of staged dramatic actions. As “unconventional” as it may seem, Magnolia has it’s own unique style and works incredibly well.

magnolia5 - <span class='title-italic'>Magnolia: </span>An Appreciation <span class='title-author'>Written by Paul Thomas Anderson</span>When I talk about Magnolia in my seminars and workshops, some people object and tell me it’s too long. They say it’s too melodramatic. They tell me it pushes the boundaries of reality. Yes, thank God. It’s the brilliance of Anderson’s vision, the intelligence of the emotional tapestry that he weaves into his fluid style of filmmaking that makes it so powerful.

Many people insist that Magnolia is an excellent example of an “unconventional” film because it doesn’t follow the “conventional” guidelines of structure, whatever that means. I confess that after all these years of studying and thinking and teaching thousands and thousands of people about the movies, I still don’t know what the phrase “conventional structure” really means. When people insist on telling me how unconventional it is, and ask if I think it still follows structure, I reply definitely, pointing out that “form follows structure;” structure is only the start point, not the end point.

It may seem that Magnolia is a fragmented, nonlinear story experience but that’s not the case at all. The nine stories told in Magnolia are all connected and related to each other. The actions of each character are superimposed, one on the other, and the film’s structure begins at the beginning of the day and ends with Earl’s death, at the end of the day.

magnolia3 - <span class='title-italic'>Magnolia: </span>An Appreciation <span class='title-author'>Written by Paul Thomas Anderson</span>The more I studied the film, the more I saw that it revolves around the dying Earl Partridge. On this, the very last day of his life, Earl wants Phil, his nurse, to find his son, Frank T.J. Mackey. Earl, as seen on the background credits on the always playing TV, is the owner/producer of the What Do Kid’s Know show, where Stanley is a key contestant. Linda is Earl’s wife. Jimmy Gator works for Earl, and, as we’ll learn later, Jimmy molested his daughter, Claudia.

As I began to see the connections of the individual stories I had the image of an old wagon wheel, where the hub at the center connects all nine spokes to the outer rim. That image stayed with me as I began analyzing the film; Earl is the hub of the story and his past actions are the glue that holds the story together in terms of the present. Earl’s guilt at leaving his wife so many years before, letting his 14 year old son, Frank, take care of his dying mother, has paid a heavy price on Earl’s conscience. The dying man has hidden that fact, and only now, as the cancer eats away at him, riddled with pain and memory, does he seek forgiveness.

It’s pretty clear Magnolia deals with the themes of reconciliation and forgiveness, revealing what the parent’s past actions have wrought upon their children. Ibsen’s great play, Ghosts, deals with this same theme, the sins of the father passed onto the son. Certainly, this is the subject of Earl’s incredible death bed monologue as he confesses his “sins” to Phil, telling him he walked out on his wife and son, leaving Frank to tend to his dying mother. “It’s the biggest regret of my life,” he says.

magnolia6 - <span class='title-italic'>Magnolia: </span>An Appreciation <span class='title-author'>Written by Paul Thomas Anderson</span>When Phil drops the liquid morphine into his mouth, it’s the end, but as it turns out, Earl’s death is really a new beginning because it’s the catalyst that brings everyone together. As the rain thunders down, we see the nine characters singing about their pain and guilt and lack of self-worth, knowing it’s just not going to stop “til you wise up.”Now that you’ve met me, would you object to never seeing me again?” Claudia asks Jim Kurring. Until they can accept themselves for who they are, until they can forgive themselves and accept their own sense of self-worth, until they can let somebody love them for who they are and let the past go, it’s not going to stop. Just “wise up.”

When I first saw this scene, I was taken aback. To have the characters break into song, expressing their pain and discomfort in a musical lyric, is an extraordinary accomplishment. I remember James Brooks tried to do this in “I’ll Do Anything,” and it didn’t work. Finally, after several different approaches in cutting the movie, Brooks had to drop the songs and tried to structure the film in a different way. But it never really worked. Paul Anderson makes it work.

Then, there are the frogs. I didn’t know quite what to make of this when I first saw it. But I love this collision of reality and unreality. I learned this while working with one of my students, the brilliant Mexican screenwriter, Laura Esquivel; Laura taught me about the heritage of the Mexican literary tradition known as “magic realism.” Working with her on the screenplay of Like Water For Chocolate, I was introduced to this concept of “exaggerated reality,” where the clash of reality and unreality blends into the framework of the story line.

magnolia7 - <span class='title-italic'>Magnolia: </span>An Appreciation <span class='title-author'>Written by Paul Thomas Anderson</span>The falling of the frogs is taken from the Bible, Exodus, Book 8, where the plague of frogs descends from the sky punishing the Pharaoh for betraying Moses and the Hebrews in the land of Egypt. As I began exploring the backgrounds of the scenes in the film, I kept seeing references to “8:2” in the audience at the TV show, or on outdoor signs on Magnolia Blvd. in the San Fernando Valley.

In the end, as Jim Kurring tells us in his voice over narration “Sometimes people need a little help. Sometimes people need to be forgiven.” In the very last scene, Jim Kurring’s voice-over narration takes us to Claudia, and she has a long, vacant look into the camera. And then, she smiles. So simple, so bright, so elegant; I had not seen her smile once during the entire film. I was so moved to see that smile, after all the pain she’s lived in and been through, and reflects such a positive ending, that it brought tears to my eyes.

The voice over narrator sums it all up: “There are stories of coincidence and chance and intersections and strange things told and which is which who only knows.and we generally say, ‘Well if that was in a movie I wouldn’t believe it.’ And it is in the humble opinion of this narrator that these strange things happen all the time.and so it goes and so it goes and the book says, ‘We may be through with the past, but the past is not through with us.”

And so it goes and so it goes.

pulpfiction01 - <span class='title-italic'>Pulp Fiction </span> <span class='title-author'>Screenplay by Quentin Tarantino, Story by Quentin Tarantino and Rogers Avary</span>

Pulp Fiction Screenplay by Quentin Tarantino, Story by Quentin Tarantino and Rogers Avary

July 4, 2013

pulpfiction01 - <span class='title-italic'>Pulp Fiction </span> <span class='title-author'>Screenplay by Quentin Tarantino, Story by Quentin Tarantino and Rogers Avary</span>Shortly after the publication of my book, Four Screenplays in the mid-nineties, I was invited to speak at a screenwriting seminar at the Mill Valley Film Festival. Mill Valley is a dedicated, intimate, and avant-garde film festival, screening a variety of films, individual in taste, style and vision. During my talk I casually mentioned that from my perspective we were in the middle of a revolution. At which point someone raised their hand and asked if I included Pulp Fiction as a part of that revolution.

Personally, I had a lot of mixed feelings about Pulp Fiction. When I had first seen it a few months earlier, it was storming across the country, creating an avalanche of opinion. People either loved it or hated it. When I walked out of the screening, I was one of those who “hated it.” I felt it was way too long, had too much gratuitous violence and was much too talky. Basically, it was a “B” movie, shallow, exploitative, the epitome of everything I don’t like in the movies. Influential maybe, significant maybe, but in no way revolutionary, as I was defining the term.

After it first came out several people had confronted me with the film’s structure and “dared” me to analyze it in terms of the paradigm. As far as everybody was concerned, Pulp Fiction was it, innovative in thought, concept and execution, everything a revolutionary film should be. I had only seen it once and I simply said it didn’t fit my construct of a revolutionary film.

I finished speaking and was preparing to leave when I was approached by a man who was intrigued by my evaluation of Pulp Fiction. We chatted for a few moments and then he invited me to be a guest on the local NPR radio station. So I went to the station the next day, sat down, and the first question he asked me was what kind of an impact did I think Pulp Fiction might have on the young, emerging filmmakers. Was it a landmark film?

pulpfiction04 - <span class='title-italic'>Pulp Fiction </span> <span class='title-author'>Screenplay by Quentin Tarantino, Story by Quentin Tarantino and Rogers Avary</span>It was a huge topic, to be sure, and I tried to answer it by saying that Pulp Fiction seemed to spark a new awareness in the filmgoer’s consciousness. Yes, I added, we were riding a wave of change, and while technology would definitely affect the movies, the real “revolution” was going to manifest itself more in terms of form than content. That is, what you show and how you show it. Pulp Fiction is definitely a part of that.

“Why?” the interviewer asked. I explained that Hollywood was in a period of change, comparable to the late 20s when sound was first introduced. At that time, through the desire to hear the actors “speak,” the camera was imprisoned inside a refrigerator and we lost the movement and fluidity of the camera we had attained during the Silent Era. All scenes had to be staged around the microphone. The actors entered the camera’s frame, spoke their lines and exited from the camera’s frame; the actors, the writers, the cameramen, were literally the prisoners of sound.

The screenwriters of the silent era did not know much about writing dialogue; their forte was telling stories with pictures, so Hollywood brought in Broadway playwrights to help them tell their stories in words, not pictures. That’s a theme F. Scott Fitzgerald touches on in his last novel, The Last Tycoon. Since that time, we’ve remained in a state of technological flux; black and white to Technicolor, standard screen size to Cinemascope, 35mm to 70mm, and now, computer graphics and digital technology. It’s the screenwriter who has really become the artisan of change because he or she must learn to use and adapt this new hi-tech awareness into their scripts.

“What do you think makes Pulp Fiction so influential?” the interviewer asked. I told him I had been confronted with that same question many times before and I still had no real answer. I concluded by saying that Pulp Fiction is definitely an influential film, may even be revolutionary and left it at that. Because it was such a hot topic of conversation, I thought I needed to look at it more closely.

When I returned home from Mill Valley, I got hold of the screenplay. When I opened it, I read on the title page that Pulp Fiction was really “three stories…about one story.” I turned the page and read two dictionary definitions of Pulp: “a soft, moist, shapeless mass of matter” and “a magazine or book containing lurid subject matter and being characteristically printed on rough, unfinished paper.” That’s certainly an accurate description of the film. But on the third page, I was surprised to find a Table of Contents.

That was odd, I thought; who writes a Table of Contents for a screenplay? I saw the film was broken down into five individual parts: Part I, was the Prologue; Part II, Vincent Vega and Marcellus Wallace’s Wife; Part III, The Gold Watch; Part IV, The Bonnie Situation, and Part V, the Epilogue.

As I studied the script, I saw that all three stories bounce off the inciting incident, the scene when Jules and Vinnie retrieve Marcellus Wallace’s briefcase from the four kids. I saw this one incident as the hub of all three stories, and noticed that each story is structured as a whole, in linear fashion; it starts at the beginning of the action, goes into the middle, then proceeds to the end. Each section is like a short story, presented from a different character’s point of view.

pulpfiction03 - <span class='title-italic'>Pulp Fiction </span> <span class='title-author'>Screenplay by Quentin Tarantino, Story by Quentin Tarantino and Rogers Avary</span>I remembered Henry James’ literary question: “What is character but the determination of incident? And, what is incident but the illumination of character?” If this key incident is the hub of the story, as I now understood it, then all things, whether actions, reactions, thoughts, memories, or flashbacks, are tethered to this one incident.

Suddenly, it all made sense. Understanding “three stories about one story” allowed me to see the film as one unified whole. Pulp Fiction is really three stories surrounded by a prologue and epilogue; what screenwriters call the “bookend” technique. Like The Bridges of Madison County (Richard LaGravenese), Sunset Boulevard (Billy Wilder and Charles Brackett), or Saving Private Ryan (Robert Rodat).

Now, I began to see how the film was put together. The Prologue sets-up Pumpkin and Honey Bunny (Tim Roth and Amanda Plummer) in a coffee shop discussing various types of small time robbery. When they finish their meal, they pull their guns and rob the place. The film freezes and we cut to the main titles. Then we cut into the middle of a conversation between Jules (Samuel L. Jackson) and Vinnie (John Travolta) driving, having an enlightening discussion about the relative merits of a Big Mac, both here and abroad.

This sets-up the entire film and tells us everything we need to know; the two men are killers working for Marcellus Wallace; their job, their dramatic need, is to retrieve the briefcase. That’s the true beginning of the story. In Part I, Jules and Vinnie arrive, state their position, kill the three guys, and it’s only by the grace of God they’re not killed. Vinnie takes Mia (Uma Thurman) out to dinner, and after her accidental overdose and rescue, they say good night. Part II is about Butch and his Gold Watch and what happens when he wins the fight instead of losing it like he had agreed to do. Part III deals with cleaning up Marvin’s remains splattered all over the car, a continuation of Part I. That’s followed by the Epilogue where Jules talks about his transformation and the significance of Divine Intervention and then Pumpkin and Honey Bunny resume the holdup that began the film in the Prologue.

It became clear to me that no matter what the form of the film, whether linear or non-linear, there is always going to be a beginning, a middle and an end. A film like Courage Under Fire (Patrick Shane Duncan) for example, or Groundhog Day (Danny Rubin, Harold Ramis), or The Usual Suspects (Chrisopher McQuarrie), or The English Patient (Anthony Minghella), or Momento (Chris Nolan), are all structured around a specific, inciting incident; only when that incident is shown does the story line split off into different directions. To build a non-linear movie means defining the parts, then structuring each part from beginning to end, at which point the screenwriter can put them into any order he or she desires.

pulpfiction06 - <span class='title-italic'>Pulp Fiction </span> <span class='title-author'>Screenplay by Quentin Tarantino, Story by Quentin Tarantino and Rogers Avary</span>I saw that Pulp Fiction was indeed, a new departure, a kind of beacon leading us into the future, like Jay Gatsby’s green light, because it presents a new way of looking at things, another step forward along the path of creative innovation in the movies.

matrix1 - <span class='title-italic'>The Matrix  </span> <span class='title-author'>Written by Lana Wachowski & Lilly Wachowski (as The Wachowski Brothers)</span>

The Matrix Written by Lana Wachowski & Lilly Wachowski (as The Wachowski Brothers)

July 4, 2013

matrix1 - <span class='title-italic'>The Matrix  </span> <span class='title-author'>Written by Lana Wachowski & Lilly Wachowski (as The Wachowski Brothers)</span>

The Matrix

I loved The Matrix – loved the action, loved the situation and characters, but most of all, I loved the idea behind the film. It was Samuel Taylor Coleridge, the 19th century poet and literary critic who coined the concept known as the willing suspension of disbelief. What he says is basically this: when we, the viewer, reader or audience, approach a work of art, we must leave our own personal beliefs, our own personal perception of reality, behind so we can approach the work on its own merits, on its own level. In other words, we must willingly suspend our disbelief no matter how distant the story line strays from what we believe to be true. All thoughts of what we believe to be true have to suspended; our “reality” has to be left behind to “the work.”

The Matrix (Larry and Andy Wachowski) is an incredible blend of action movie that embodies interesting content and dynamic visual execution.

The opening scene lets us in on what’s going to follow. Now, this is no normal action sequence of fists flying, shots fired and a few explosions. This is a totally unique ass grabbing sequence; first, not only does it pit a lone woman against four, maybe more, policeman, all armed and wearing bullet proof vests, but right before our eyes, in amazing physical feats, Trinity manages to escape. We’re with her as she leaps from rooftop to rooftop, building to building, defying gravity in her death defying escape from the Sentient Agents. She literally flies through the air, reaches the “other side,” then on foot, races the garbage truck to reach the ringing telephone. She manages to get there first and just answers the phone before the truck slams directly into the telephone booth. It is a miraculous escape.

Whoa.if that’s not a grabber, I don’t know what is. In terms of information, we still don’t know anything, we don’t know who Trinity is, or whether she’s a “good guy” or a “bad guy,” nor do we know what the story’s about, or how she managed to escape the way she did. But it’s an opening that grabs our attention immediately.

matrix4 - <span class='title-italic'>The Matrix  </span> <span class='title-author'>Written by Lana Wachowski & Lilly Wachowski (as The Wachowski Brothers)</span>At this point, we still don’t know what’s going on. Because the filmmakers have completely grabbed our attention, it’s precisely at this moment that we need information; we need to know what the story is about, who’s the main character, and what’s the dramatic situation. In dramatic terms, exposition is defined as the necessary information needed to move the story forward. Trinity tells Neo that he’s in danger because he’s expressed the desire to know who or what the Matrix is. She stresses “the truth is out there, Neo and it’s looking for you and will find you, if you want it to.” Then she’s gone.

I bought that immediately. Later, we’ll learn that we’re in parallel universe and the matrix is a state of virtual reality, an illusion, maya, as the ancient scriptures say, and we’ve been programmed to accept it as real. But the truth is that the “real” world has been recreated by a race of machines, called AI, artificial intelligence. In this scenario, the computers have literally re-created the world in the form of virtual reality.

Morpheus is dedicated to waging war against the Matrix to reveal the truth and liberate humanity from the bondage of the machines. Their hope, Morpheus believes, lies in finding “the One,” a human being endowed with God-like powers that will lead them in their war of liberation. And he believes Neo is “the One”. Even though the mind and body are entwined with each other, they are separate entities; therefore, if you control the mind, you can control reality and your own destiny.

This is demonstrated with Neo at work; he receives a package and a cell phone pops out, ringing. Morpheus is on the line. They’re after you, he says, and there’s only two ways to leave the building; either you choose to leave by the scaffolding hanging outside the window, or you choose to leave in their company. Neo is forced to choose, and this theme of choice is a recurring motif throughout the film. Like Hamlet, or the warrior Arjuna in the classic Indian epic, the Bhagavad Gita, Neo embodies the stance of the reluctant hero and before he can rise to another, higher level of consciousness he must accept who he is, accept his destiny.

Everything we’ve seen so far has been to set up and establish the story, the characters and the premise. It gives us all the information we need to move to the next story progression. Neo meeting Morpheus is the Plot Point at the end of Act I.

matrix2 - <span class='title-italic'>The Matrix  </span> <span class='title-author'>Written by Lana Wachowski & Lilly Wachowski (as The Wachowski Brothers)</span>As a side note, one of the things I found interesting was the names used in The Matrix. When I started exploring their origin, I found they’re derived from ancient history and mythology. They reflect an metaphoric significance. The name of Morpheus’s ship, for example, the Nebuchadnezzar, is named after the Babylonian king who lived in the Fifth Century, BC. Heralded as the greatest king of the Babylonian Dynasty, he’s credited with tearing down, then re-building the ancient temples, so he is both a destroyer and re-builder. The name fits the ship’s destiny for it houses the rebel force bent upon destroying and rebuilding the Matrix. The same with Morpheus; in Greek mythology, he is the God of Sleep, building and weaving the fabric of our dreams in the deep sleep state. Neo, of course, means “new,” and the religious implications of Trinity are obvious.

From now on, the story progresses by action and explanation. Is Neo really “the One” as Morpheus and the rebels believe? Finding the answer is Neo’s dramatic need and powers the story forward. Only when he can accept being “the One”, can he really be “the One.” What we believe to be true, is true..

Action and explanation. During their meeting, Morpheus offers him a choice; the blue pill and ordinary reality, or the red pill and the truth. There’s no hesitation. Neo takes the red one. Reality distorts as he falls through the corridors of reality into the nether world and be reborn.

Once Neo is reborn, he must re-train both body and mind; he learns martial arts via a computer program, acquires extraordinary leaping abilities, and begins to comprehend that while he inhabits the virtual reality of the Matrix, his mind is limited. Freed from the constraints of the limited mind, he can explore the untapped resources of his unlimited self. His struggle to free himself from these limitations is what guides him to the understanding that only he can choose to wear the mantle of “the One.” This is the same journey that is undertaken by the great Beings and the great Saints in Eastern religion and philosophy. Only when we can give up the concepts of the limited self can we attain enlightenment and liberation. Educating his mind and body carries the action forward through the first half of Act II. Once Neo completes his training, Morpheus takes him to meet The Oracle.

Neo’s encounter with the Oracle is the Mid-Point of the story. When she casually asks if he believes he’s “the One,” Neo shakes his head; “I’m just an ordinary guy.” Once again, his belief systems, the limitations of his own mind, imprison him. Too bad, she says. Why? Neo asks. “Because Morpheus believes in you Neo, and no one, not even you or me, can convince him otherwise,” she says. “He believes it so blindly that he’s going to sacrifice his life for you. You’re going to have to make a choice. On one hand, you’ll have Morpheus’s life… and on the other hand, you’ll have your own. One of you is going to die..Which one, will be up to you.”

The Oracle is a great character. She goes against all our expectations of what we normally would expect. Ordinarily, we would expect the Oracle to be an old, old, old man, extremely wise, with white hair and possibly a long straggly beard. Instead, we’re surprised to discover a middle-aged woman baking cookies. She is his “mirror;” she reflects what he believes, then tells him what she sees. Gradually, the reluctant hero assumes the mantle of faith, accepts the challenge of being “the One,” in much the same way Hamlet and Arjuna, both realize they must accept their fate. Neo is “the One” who has been chosen to “set the times right,” whether he likes it or not.

The Oracle’s prophecy is coming true, and no matter whether Neo thinks he’s “the One” or not, he’s determined that he’s not going to let Morpheus die at the hands of the Matrix.

“The Oracle told me this would happen,” Neo says. “She told me I would have to make a choice.” He pauses, then says, “I may not be what Morpheus thinks I am, but if I don’t try to help him, then I’m not even what I think I am..I’m going in after him.” When he declares himself in this fashion, he has accepted his role as “the One.”

matrix3 - <span class='title-italic'>The Matrix  </span> <span class='title-author'>Written by Lana Wachowski & Lilly Wachowski (as The Wachowski Brothers)</span>Neo’s decision to rescue Morpheus is Plot Point II; that incident, episode or event that hooks into the action and spins it around into another direction, in this case, Act III. Remember at Plot Point I, in their first encounter, Morpheus asks Neo if he believes in fate, and Neo replies, no; “Because I don’t like the idea that I’m not in control of my life.” At this point, it really doesn’t matter whether he believes it or not; it’s his fate, his destiny.

Plot Point II takes us into the resolution of the story.

Tank loads up Neo and Trinity with an armory of guns, and they’re off. In another fantastic action sequence, incorporating wild stunts and inventive computer graphics, Neo rescues Morpheus. As they leave the Matrix, after Morpheus and Trinity are beamed up to the mother ship, Agent Smith appears and after a long and arduous battle, Neo succumbs to Agent Smith and dies.

And here’s where our belief systems come into play. The scriptures say love is the most powerful force in the world. The capacity of the human heart knows no bounds; it is the hub of all sacred places. Love is so strong it can remain embedded in our collective unconscious and can endure for lifetime after lifetime. Love is so strong it can even bring the dead back to life. Look at Jesus. Love is a force that never dies.

Trinity, standing over Neo’s inert body, now shares with him what the Oracle has told her; that she would fall in love with the man who was “the One.” Even though Neo’s dead, she believes with all her heart what the Oracle told her. Love is stronger than the physical body. “Now get up,” she demands. Neo’s eyes flip open, and he’s resurrected. A miracle? Of course. Once again, he has died so he can be reborn as “the One.” How? It doesn’t matter how. Either we believe it or we don’t; it is the willing suspension of disbelief. He has overcome the limitations of his mind and has become liberated. He has chosen to wear the mantle of “the One.”

At the end, Neo mingles with a crowd in the Matrix. And he tells us that “I know you’re real proud of this world you’ve built, the way it works, all the nice little rules and such, but I’ve got some bad news.I’ve decided to make a few changes.” Then there’s a RUSH of air and Neo shoots by, “coat billowing like a black leather cape as he soars up, up, and away.”

Fade Out. The End.

thesearchers6 - <span class='title-italic'>The Searchers: </span>A Look Back <span class='title-author'>Screenplay by Frank S. Nugent, From the novel by Alan LeMay</span>

The Searchers: A Look Back Screenplay by Frank S. Nugent, From the novel by Alan LeMay

July 4, 2013

thesearchers6 - <span class='title-italic'>The Searchers: </span>A Look Back <span class='title-author'>Screenplay by Frank S. Nugent, From the novel by Alan LeMay</span>
Recently, I had the opportunity of seeing John Ford’s great classic Western, The Searchers. I hadn’t seen it for many years and I found myself still riveted by the epic sweep of the story and the visual splendor of Monument Valley, perhaps Ford’s favorite location.

John Wayne plays a former officer in the Confederacy, Ethan Edwards, who returns home a few years after the Civil War to find his family massacred and his niece kidnapped by a renegade band of Comanches. Ethan vows his revenge and begins an obsessive hunt to find his niece (Natalie Wood). But his search, begun as an heroic adventure, soon turns into a dark and obsessive manhunt.

My image of John Wayne has always been as the classic western hero, strong, rugged, silent, following a code of honor and moral behavior that represents all the best virtues of the old West. Wayne’s screen image is a mythic, heroic figure determinedly following his path to achieve what is right, noble and just, while still remaining true to his beliefs. The Searchers starts out this way, and it’s pretty clear that the search is what defines his life and gives it meaning.

thesearchers1 - <span class='title-italic'>The Searchers: </span>A Look Back <span class='title-author'>Screenplay by Frank S. Nugent, From the novel by Alan LeMay</span>It didn’t take long for me to see that the character of Ethan Edwards is different than most of the other parts John Wayne plays, whether in Stagecoach, Red River, She Wore a Yellow Ribbon or Fort Apache. In The Searchers, Ethan Edwards is a person who doesn’t belong anywhere, the outsider, a man doomed to “wander on the wind.” As the story unfolds, the thin line between obsession and revenge, the opposite poles of “civilization” and “wilderness” become totally blurred.

Ethan begins the search for his kidnapped niece as an agent of civilization performing a heroic and humanitarian task. But as time passes, we see by his actions that he seems more aligned with the forces of darkness than civilization. His obsession takes over and he refuses to listen to reason or his own inherent humanity. In the beginning we think it’s Ethan’s honor that drives him, a form of revenge for the massacre of his loved ones, but as time passes we learn he’s a racist who wants to find his niece only to kill her. She has become “spoiled,” a squaw, unfit to be in a “white” family, as she must now be “tainted” with the blood of the Comanches.

What I found so interesting is that the film mirrors the racial tensions going on in America at the time the film was made, 1956. It was the start of the Civil Rights Movement, and Ethan’s obsessive quest seems to parallel the times in Hollywood when the Hollywood Blacklist was in effect. This horrific witch hunt took its toll on the lives and careers of professional people who were forced to test their honor and integrity. The Hollywood Ten spent a year in prison as the principles of self-respect, artistic freedom, became the rallying cries of the screenwriters who were suffering from the outrage and indignities of this period.

thesearchers3 - <span class='title-italic'>The Searchers: </span>A Look Back <span class='title-author'>Screenplay by Frank S. Nugent, From the novel by Alan LeMay</span>
Director John Ford

I think this is the first time I can recall a film portraying the traditional Western hero in a critical light. By the same token, the Native American point of view is edged with understanding and humanity. By balancing these two poles between the two poles of civilization and wilderness, the heroic and obsessive, John Ford deepens the tensions and characterizations in the movie.

Ethan’s obsession is what drives him relentlessly to search for his niece. For 7 years, Ethan trails the renegades, never giving up, driven by his fixation to kill and avenge the death of his family.

As I watched Ethan’s quest, I thought his journey might have been derived from the work of Joseph Campbell. Campbell had reached back through time, memory and culture to collect a series of myths from the ancient, primitive and contemporary traditions, culling them into a basic form which he termed “the heroes journey.” Campbell found that in almost all myths and cultures, from ancient times to modern, the hero travels along the same path and reaches the same destination; enlightenment and realization. As the hero follows this path, he encounters various obstacles that test the nature of his resolve and serve to elevate him to a higher level of consciousness and understanding, a new level of being.

While I was watching The Searchers, I tried to relate Campbell’s concepts to Ethan’s journey. Though Ethan is placed in a situation where he confronts a series of obstacles in order to achieve a higher state of consciousness, he refuses to bend his principles, or his beliefs, to the issue at hand. His journey is both a physical as well as spiritual one, because it takes place inside his head as well as outside in the obstacles he confronts. In Campbell’s work, the hero in his journey experiences a symbolic transformation of death and resurrection as he casts off the old parts of his life; he needs to be re-born and emerge into the “birth” of his new self. In mythological terms, Campbell says, the heroes’ journey is one of acceptance; the hero must accept his fate, his destiny, no matter whether it is life or death.

This is not the case in The Searchers.

thesearchers5 - <span class='title-italic'>The Searchers: </span>A Look Back <span class='title-author'>Screenplay by Frank S. Nugent, From the novel by Alan LeMay</span>The first thing I noticed is that John Wayne’s character doesn’t change. There is no transformation in his character; he’s exactly the same at the end of the movie as he was at the beginning. Wayne’s image, as a man of action, is heroic precisely because he does not change; he refuses to give up, bend or alter his ways until his mission is accomplished; to find and rescue the kidnapped girl. And when he does find her, we don’t know whether he’s going to kill, or embrace her. Finally, in a dramatic scene, he relents and embraces her. At the end, when the family enters the house to celebrate their return, Wayne remains outside the doorway, a desolate, homeless drifter doomed to wander “between the winds.”

In Campbell’s analysis, the hero weathers every obstacle but returns home a wiser and better person, sharing his newfound awareness with his fellow man. That certainly doesn’t happen in The Searchers. At the end of The Searchers, it is his very strength of character that leads to his isolation and loneliness. In comparing it to other films of the period, this is the start of the “anti-hero,” the character who goes his own way even though it may be against the laws of society.

What makes this film a classic, I think, is that the traditional moral lines of good and bad, or right and wrong, and black and white, are blurred. It’s is a tribute to Ford’s genius that he could combine both the look and feel of an epic Western, as well as reflect the social nature of the times and the very ambiguity of the changing times.

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